This fan fic was first published on DeviantArt under my other alias ZTheGS.
The DeviantArt version can be found here.
This is the uncensored/mature version of this fan fic.
The censored version can be found by clicking here.
This page contains chapter 1 to 10 and onwards. Click here to read chapter 11 an onwards.
A Visit from outer Space
Date (started): 2016-05-01
Date (finished): 2016-07-28
This was originally started out as Roleplay #1!, but as no one joined the roleplay, I made this into it's own story. This doesn't mean we can't have a completely different roleplay, if anyone joins us in this!
The original version from the roleplay only goes as far as "Suddenly..." from the first Chapter, while the rest is entirely new.
This fan fic also features a few original characters which were made by me and aren't related to the Kishin Douji Zenki series. These are Red, Vyvil and Vyvil's minions (the Pouncers and Wingslashs). If you want to read more about these, please visit my DeviantArt gallery, as this wiki won't have any articles on fan characters.
This is the more mature and also more violent, uncensored version of my fan fiction A Visit from outer Space. The uncensored version is less bowlderized, for example Zenki curses a lot more and Vyvil appears a lot earlier. This version also has some fighting scenes between Zenki and Vyvil, which aren't featured in the other version.
If the uncensored version is too violent for you, feel free to read the censored version which meant for younger audiences.
A Visitor from outer Space
It's a nice and sunny day at the Enno Shrine.
Chibi Zenki is sleeping at the rooftops as usual.
He wakes up as his stomach starts to grumble, picks his right ear, yawns and says: "Heh. I could eat a really big Hyouinomi right now."
Zenki starts sniffing, but is disappointed as he doesn't smell any Hyouinomi or any scent of food whatsoever.
Something is wrong today.
Suddenly, Zenki notices a foreign scent and spots a strange, humanoid, female creature.
A naked girl with red skin, two horns, a fuzzy tail and kangaroo-like feet quickly jumps from a nearby rooftop into a tree, only her orange eyes can be seen as she carefully hides herself.
He just saw a naked girl jumping around, but Zenki isn't bothered by that and just lets out a bored "Heh."
He lays down again and continues to watch the girl.
She curiously eyes him from her hiding spot and makes a cute smile.
The girl picks a few fruits and makes a little basket.
She carefully puts the fruits into the basket and jumps to Zenki's place.
Zenki continues watching her and doesn't bother to move.
The girl keeps smiling and presents Zenki the food.
Zenki's belli starts grumbling.
He takes a fruit, sniffs at it, carefully inspecting it before putting it into his mouth.
Zenki starts eating one fruit after another, while the girl draws closer and sits beside him.
The girl gives him a cute smile and pets his hair, but Zenki is too occupied with eating to notice this.
He eats till the basket is empty.
Zenki doesn't even thank the girl for giving him food.
She slowly walks away from him, then she jumps onto a rooftop and she's gone.
Why won't you wake up?
The now stuffed Chibi Zenki goes into the Enno Shrine and notices that everyone else is still sleeping.
That's very unusual, as Akira is often the first one who gets up and starts working at his art.
Zenki goes into Chiaki's room and finds Chiaki sleeping with Lulupapa on top of her.
Chibi Zenki gets mad and starts poking Chiaki in the face, but nothing happens.
He thrashes Chiaki's room and a few things fall over, but she still doesn't wake up.
Angry Chibi Zenki runs off, searching for the strange girl, he met earlier, believing her to be the culprit now.
The girl is nowhere to be found and Zenki starts moving along the rooftops.
Shikigami-Cho is bustling as ever, only the residents of the Enno Shrine seem to be affected by this strange event.
Zenki now gets really worried. "Damn it! What if Karuma or her servants attack while I'm like this?! I'm so screwed!"
He runs off into the forest and finds Karuma, Guren, Goura, Anju and two Hyouijuu standing at the bottom of a well, talking to each other.
Zenki lets out a silent curse and quickly leaves, going back to the village rooftops. (Karuma and her kin don't notice him)
While moving along the rooftops, he spots the girl again.
This time she is petting a small Hyouijuu, feeding it some fish.
The Hyouijuu is happy and jumps onto her lap like a dog.
Zenki now thinks that he is right and slowly approaches without being noticed.
A new foe? Despair and a Ray of Hope
As the girl's new "dog" suddenly curls up and starts growling, she looks at Chibi Zenki who leaps at her.
The girl swiftly gets up and gently sidesteps Zenki's attack, which causes him to fall face first onto the roof tiles.
As Zenki gets up and starts growling as well, the girl takes the small Hyouijuu and breathes some strange green aura onto it.
It becomes a full fledged, monstrous, Hyouijuu dog, twice as tall as Zenki's Demon God form.
The monster stands on its four legs, large spikes protruding from its back and its thin tail. It lets out a horrible growl.
Chibi Zenki is shocked and starts sweating and shivering, while still giving the Hyouijuu and the girl a convenient smile, like it's all no big deal.
The girl notices this, gives Zenki a cute smile and sends the beast away.
The dog jumps off the roof and now runs straight into an alleyway.
Zenki is confused for a second, but then he doesn't ask any questions and attacks her again.
The girl sidesteps him again and he makes another faceplant at the roof tiles.
Zenki gets up and exclaims: "Stop avoiding me, you stinking bitch! Fight me like a man!"
The girl starts to chuckle, which makes Zenki even more annoyed.
Chibi Zenki clenches his fists, grumbles and tries to run off, because he can't beat that girl.
The girl is faster and grabs him by his ponytail.
He starts to struggle, but the girl hugs him and gives him a kiss.
Zenki is completely confused and punches her in the face.
She starts cursing and throws him away with great force.
Chibi Zenki crashes straight into a small house close to the Enno Shrine.
After a few seconds, he claws his hand into the floor and lets out a silent curse.
He tries to get up, but Zenki is too injured and struggles to even stay on his knees.
A badly wounded Chibi Zenki forces himself to stand up, clutching his chest and breathing heavily.
He starts to cough up some blood.
Suddenly he notices the girl standing on the rooftop and decides that he can't stay in these ruins of a hut.
Zenki limps to the Enno Shrine, sometimes glancing over his shoulder, only to suddenly see the shadowy silhouette of a girl with kangaroo-like feet jump on a rooftop behind him.
Chibi Zenki shivers and feels great fear crawling through his weakened body.
Somehow he manages to avoid the strange creature.
Zenki enters Chiaki's room again, shakes her and screams: "Damn it, Chiaki! Transform me, immediately!"
Chiaki takes and cuddles Lulupapa. They both continue sleeping.
Zenki is very desperate and starts panting in pain as his blood drips to the floor.
Suddenly he sees the Bracelet of Protection laying on a small table.
Zenki takes the Bracelet of Protection away and starts to read Chiaki's dairy, searching for the spell to break his seals.
After finding what he wants, Zenki falls to the floor and tells himself: "Darn it. I can't give up yet..."
He tightly grips the Bracelet of Protection with his hand and exclaims:
"And now I awaken the Demon God! Unlock the holy spell with the secret sword! Break free, Vajura on Ark! Rise up, Zenki!"
First, nothing happens and Zenki thinks he's done for, but then the Bracelet of Protection starts glowing and his seals break.
His wounds are healed. As Demon God Zenki gets up, he ends up hitting his head on the ceiling: "Ow!"
Zenki involuntarily bows and gets outside, exclaiming: "The God Zenki has risen!"
...and walks straight into a doorframe, hitting his head again. Zenki: "Curses!"
An unseen girl starts laughing at him.
The stranger's introduction
Zenki gets mad and calls out: "Who is there? Show yourself!"
The girl from earlier jumps out of a tree, cracking her neck and her fists.
Zenki is mad at her and cries out: "You did this to my friends, didn't you?!"
The girl sighs and gives him a cute smile while nudging her head to the side.
Zenki: "Huh? Can't you speak, woman?"
Before he can continue saying anything the girl teasingly says: "Oh, did I do something to your friends?"
Zenki: "What?! Who are you anyway?! ..."
Girl: "Hehehehahaha... I'm Vyvil, the dark creatress of terror and destruction. My blazing fires will..."
Before Vyvil can continue saying anything, Zenki bolts out: "I don't care! You stinking bitch! I will beat the crap out of you for treating me like a toy!"
Vyvil: "Oh, really? How cute..."
Zenki lets out an angry growl and glares at her.
Vyvil sighs, calmly walks up to him and gently kisses him, scorching his cheek with her fiery breath.
Zenki quickly jumps away from her.
"Oi! Woman! What is wrong with you?!"
Vyvil nudges her head to the side and says: "Why are you so mad at me? We just started having fun."
Zenki is very pissed and gets his Diamond Axe: "You... Even though you are a woman, I won't hold back!"
Vyvil summons a thorned, burning whip out of nowhere: "You are cute when you are angry, but I'm afraid that I might end up killing you if I don't hold back, so you will meet my Thorned Blaze Fire Whip instead."
Zenki glares, but he takes a few steps back as Vyvil cracks her whip, leaving about 50cm deep scorched marks in the ground.
She gives him an evil smile, slightly scaring Zenki.
Zenki: "Damn you! I'm the great Zenki-Sama! Feel my wrath!"
Vyvil laughs at Zenki. He leaps away a bit farther and attacks her, shooting a Vajura from his fist and hits her head on.
Zenki: "Not so tough now, aren't ya?"
As the smoke clears, his laugh is suddenly cut off, as Vyvil is standing there completely unharmed.
Zenki curses and attacks her with his Diamond Axe, but she stops the axe's blade with a finger and completely breaks Zenki's axe into tiny pieces by snipping it away with her finger.
Zenki is horrified and takes a few steps back, but Vyvil is faster and presses herself against him, charring him with her hot body (no pun intended) and wrapping her arms around his neck as she teasingly kisses him on his lips.
He tries to fight back, but Vyvil is faster and uses her trademark move, ramming her horned knee right into his most sensitive parts.
Zenki curses in pain as she gently kisses him again, diving her horns even deeper into his groin and licks his cheek.
Vyvil is already sure of her victory, bites him in the throat with her pointy fangs and starts to suck his blood.
Zenki is still trying to get this devil/vampire whatever (he is still unsure what exactly Vyvil is) woman off him as she licks the blood of his throat, still twisting her horns and causing him great agony.
Zenki: "Damn you, woman! You won't defeat me using such underhanded methods!"
Vyvil lets out an amused giggle, yanking her knee out of his groin and kneeing him again, now with full force and her knee being on fire.
Zenki lets out a horrible scream and struggles even more desperately, now turning into his Great Demon God form all by himself.
Vyvil is blinded by the light and lets go of him for a few seconds, enough for Zenki to get out of her range.
The transformation has caused Zenki to fully recover from his wounds.
Zenki gives Vyvil a death glare and exclaims: "You monster! I will tear you apart with my bare hands and show you the true meaning of vegeance!"
Vyvil glares back and says: "You bastard, don't surprise attack me like that!"
Zenki laughs and says: "Heh, you don't like light, do you? So I guess, I might have no other choice..."
Before he can finish his sentence, Vyvil cracks her whip and hits Zenki with it, instantly knocking him down, badly charring him and leaving a huge, bleading hole in his chest.
Vyvil: "You really thought that this was all I got? I told you I was holding back. Hehehe..."
Zenki curses, but can't get up. He thinks to himself: "Damn, how could she be this strong?! She's even more powerful than the damn Inugami and his stupid dog!"
Just as Zenki mentions them, a young man and a dog show up levitating in mid-air, laughing at his demise.
Great Demon God Zenki starts growling.
The man sees his chance and sends his dog to finish Zenki off, but before the dog can bite Zenki, Vyvil hits the dog with her burning whip, tearing it to pieces.
Zenki has recovered a bit from his wounds and is already on his knees, but seeing Vyvil tear the Inugami and his dog apart like insects scares the heck out of him: "D-Darn it! How can she be so powerful?!"
Vyvil starts laughing maniacally and says: "This was amusing. Fine, I'll give you a chance."
She heals Zenki's wounds, lifts the curse on the Enno Shrine and warps away.
Great Demon God Zenki gets up and gulps.
He is still shivering in fear of that powerful foe, he just met.
Crashing Karuma's Party
Karuma, Goura, Guren, Anju and a few Hyouijuu are standing outside a well in the forest.
Suddenly they feel a horrible aura.
A naked girl with red skin, two horns, a fuzzy tail and kangaroo-like feet appears out of nowhere.
Karuma and her crew look up to the treetops and see her hanging upside-down by her feet.
Then the girl lets herself fall down and somehow lands on her feet right in front of the group.
Karuma and the others are still wondering what they just experienced.
The strange girl is completely unharmed from her fall and smiles at them.
Karuma takes a few steps back and hides behind the Hyouijuu, while Goura, Anju and Guren go and talk to the stranger.
The girl exclaims: "Hi! I'm Vyvil, the dark creatress of terror and destruction. My blazing fires scorch everything in my path."
Her horrible aura becomes even more noticeable.
Karuma nods and her underlings step aside.
Karuma: "And what kind of business does an evil presence like you have in the great sorcerer Karuma's territory?"
Vyvil: "Business is the right word. Let's have some fun."
Karuma is wondering if that girl just challenged her to a fight or if she wants to have business with her...
Vyvil: "Let's burn down that stupid village! Burn the whole place! Make them suffer!"
Karuma: "It seems like that can be arranged... I'm in."
Vyvil and Karuma join forces.
Before Vyvil leaves again, she leaves some huge gorilla hog chimeras and shadowy bird people as a present.
Vyvil: "These huge gorillas are Pouncers. They can smash anything that gets in your way and nothing can get through them. The other guys are Wingslashs. They are super-fast and their sharp wings can cut through anything."
Karuma looks at Vyvil.
Vyvil: "But I don't need any assistance. I will take care of your enemies by myself."
Vyvil warps away before Karuma can say anything.
The Curse is lifted
Shortly after Vyvil left, Great Demon God Zenki passed out from the fear.
A few hours later he wakes up in his Chibi form and finds himself at the fireplace inside the Enno Shrine, laying on the pillow, grandmother Saki usually sits on.
As he can tell, it's already at night-time, as the moon shines through a window.
As Zenki gets up and sits on the pillow, he finds a crying Chiaki (with Lulupapa sleeping in her hair) laying beside him.
Chibi Zenki lets out a relieved sigh and gently moves his hand through Chiaki's hair.
After that, he notices Akira who just came into the room.
Akira: "Zenki! What happened? Chiaki found you outside, laying in a pool of blood! We were really worried about you!"
Akira: "Chiaki got so worried about you that she couldn't sleep anymore and had to look after you despite Saki telling her to go to bed again."
Zenki decides to tell Akira what happened.
Everyone goes to sleep.
At the next morning, Zenki and Akira tell the others what happened and everyone readies themselves for a fight.
Everyone acts as if nothing happened to give a possible attacker a false sense of security.
Chibi Zenki lays on the rooftop and acts as if he was sleeping.
Suddenly another strange girl appears, alerting Zenki, causing his ears to twitch.
Unlike the other one, this one doesn't have horns and instead of being red and naked, she has short, white fur.
Her tail is also a lot fuzzier then the other one's and she has black eyes.
As the girl comes closer, Zenki acts as if he was just waking up and sits there, staring at the girl.
The girl makes a cute smile, sits down and nods her head to the side.
Zenki: "Who are you?"
The girl answers him by introducing herself: "Oh, hello. I'm Red, a well-known heroine across the entire existence. ..."
Before Red can continue saying anything, Zenki glares at her and asks her if she's allied with that vicious Vyvil.
Red: "Oh, no! You have met Vyvil? What has she done this time? We have to stop her immediately!"
Zenki notices that Red is really worried and tells her what happened.
Red: "This is horrible! I'm really sorry, I didn't arrive sooner!"
Zenki nods his head to the side, as Red comes closer and caresses his cheek.
Vyvil's attacks have left a mark.
As Red touches the charred wound on Zenki's cheek, he flinches in pain.
Chibi Zenki: "What the?! Ow!"
Red: "Relax, it's okay. I won't hurt you."
Zenki glares at Red, yet he is slightly confused.
Zenki: "Fine... I trust you, I guess..."
Red: "Wounds caused by a creatress' wrath never completely heal by themselves. Only the one who caused them or an equal or a more powerful creatress can fully heal these."
Red gently touches Zenki's wound again, causing him to flinch again, but now his wound is gone.
Zenki is now even more confused, but trusts her for real.
Red: "You poor thing. Vyvil is very vicious. She would never completely heal her victim's wounds."
Zenki lets Red treat his wounds.
Chibi Zenki: "Ghag! Ow, ow, ow..."
Red: "She even used her trademark move on you? You poor thing."
Zenki: "N-no. Not down there! No one is allowed to touch me there!"
Red: "Sigh... But if you don't let me treat your wounds, you might lose your manhood."
Zenki sighs: "Fine, but be gentle, okay?"
Red is gentle, but Chibi Zenki still screams out in great agony and passes out as she touches him to heal his wounds.
Akira who was working on a sculpture screams: "Zenki! What are you doing?! Did you hit your head or something?!"
Red transforms into a Chibi Zenki clone and Chibi Zenki Red steps forth and lies to Akira.
Chibi Zenki Red in a pained voice: "Damn, Akira! I thought I noticed the scent of a Hyouinomi and leaped down, but I didn't notice a tree branch and landed on it."
Akira is horrified and asks if everything is alright again.
Chibi Zenki Red still in a pained voice: "The great Zenki-Sama won't go down from a nutcracker accident!"
Akira is still horrified, but then he breaks out in laughter.
Akira: "Ah, right Zenki! How could I ever think that anything could stop you."
He continues working on his sculpture, while Red turns back into her true form and heals Zenki's remaining wounds.
Confusion and Affection
Later that day, Chibi Zenki sits on the roof, still eying that strange girl that healed his wounds.
Red sits on the roof as well and wiggles with her ears.
Zenki: "Oi! Why did you heal my wounds? Do you expect me do something for you in return or something like that?"
Red turns around, nods her head to the side and smiles.
This confuses Chibi Zenki. "W-What do you want from me?"
Red: "I like you. You're cute and I have been watching you for a long time now."
Zenki is shocked. "What the heck?! You perverted bitch!"
Red blushes: "No! It's not like that!"
Now Zenki nods his head to the side and is even more confused.
Red stands up and draws closer to him.
He quickly gets up and changes into his fighting stance.
Chibi Zenki: "Stay away from me, woman!"
She makes a sad face and then her eyebrow starts twitching slightly.
Chibi Zenki: "Tell me what you want and I might listen to what you have to say."
Red: "I-I guess... I like you."
Zenki: "Heh... Is that so? I don't care if you like me. I don't even know if I can trust you or not."
Red's eyebrow twitches even more and she starts to get slightly annoyed.
Zenki: "Hehehe... Really? Why would I, the great Zenki-Sama, pick some random woman for my mate. It's not even mating time and I never ever met a woman that would fit me..."
"The only kind of woman I would respect would be a female Kishin who's also stronger than me. But that's impossible as I'm the strongest Kishin!"
Red clenches her fists, growls, quickly walks up to Chibi Zenki and kicks him where it hurts with full force.
Chibi Zenki grits his teeth: "You stinking bitch! How dare you... Grrr..."
He struggles to stay on his feet, but says: "A cheap trick like that won't take me down. Rrrr..."
Both glare at each other.
Zenki is so angry that he breaks his seal on his own.
He turns into his Demon God form and now towers over Red.
Demon God Zenki: "You want a piece of me? Fine. I won't hold back even if you are a woman and I'm much less holding back now that I know that you are fighting dirty."
Red (still furious - in a calm, but also somehow threatening tone): "Sigh... You really want to fight me and you want me to be a Kishin?"
Red transforms and turns into a female Kishin.
Zenki is confused: "How did you do that?! Weren't you something completely different just a few seconds ago?! Never mind, I'll rip you to pieces, you dirty cheater!"
Red versus Zenki
With her transformation and her furious state, Red's personality has changed completely.
Red (in a threatening tone): "There are some things you don't know about me... Some things that would better stay hidden..."
"First. I'm a very moody person. My personality can change into the exact opposite in an instant."
"Second. Never piss me off or you are going to pay for it dearly."
"Third. Never call me a dirty cheater. If I didn't fight like this, I would have never survived this many battles, you novice..."
Zenki: "Heh, for a woman, you talk a lot. Bring it on!"
They both jump down the roof and land in the Enno Shrine's outdoors area, but now Akira and the others notice them and they join the fight.
Now Red faces Battle Demon God Zenki, Goki (third form), Chiaki, Miki Souma and Miss Kazue.
Red: "It's getting kinda crowded here, isn't it."
Chiaki: "Who are you and what do you want from us?"
Red: "The name's Red and the rest doesn't matter now. It's just me and Zenki. The rest of you stay out of this!"
Chiaki: "Who do you think you are to order us around?! Go get her Zenki and Goki!"
Zenki cracks his fists: "I was going to get her anyway. You didn't need to tell me that."
Goki: "Alright, Master!"
Kazue shots her anti-spirit gun at Red, but Red flicks the shot back at her.
Before the shot can hit Kazue, Goki blocks it with his shield.
Next, Miki Souma attacks Red with his swords.
Red summons are yellow rapier made of pure electricity and quickly takes him down by using a forbidden technique.
Miki Souma is instantly knocked out and doesn't breathe anymore.
Chiaki runs to him and cries: "What did you do to him?!"
Red: "A precise sting into a specific spot in his neck and he's knocked out cold. I could also completely immobilize a foe with this while they stay concious, but that would be cruel."
Kazue: "Chiaki, you need to stay focused! I will bring him inside, so Saki can take care of him!"
Chiaki gulps and does just as Kazue says. While she does so, a tear runs down Chiaki's cheek.
Goki: "Master! Please don't cry. Everything is gonna be alright!"
Goki leaps to Chiaki and comforts her.
Chiaki: "Thank you, Akira..."
Goki stays at her side while Zenki glares at Red and asks: "Huh? Is that everything you've got? Well... If Goki isn't going to join this fight, I guess it's my turn again..."
Zenki cracks his fists and glares at Red.
Red is unimpressed.
"He who stands tall will break his neck as he tumbles down..."
She desummons her sword and now justs stands there, taunting Zenki.
Zenki: "Huh? So you are going to let me go first? You fool!"
He extends his Diamond Horns and Chiaki summons the Diamond Axe for him.
Now Battle Demon God Zenki with the Diamond Axe charges at Red.
Red: "This is amusing."
He hits her with the Diamond Axe multiple times and then continues with a barrage of punches, his elbows and his Diamond Horns.
Zenki is tired. He leaps backwards and when he lands suddenly his Diamond Horns and Diamond Axe break.
Zenki: "What the heck?! This can't be!"
Red is completely unharmed and glares at him while putting on an evil grin.
Zenki: "Huh? I guess I have no other choice..."
"Zenki, no! Don't do it. You might die if you use Rudra!"
Zenki: "Goki, protect them with anything you've got. I will use my Rudra against this powerful foe."
Goki: "Zenki! Retreat! If you can't harm her with the Diamond Axe, there's no way Rudra is going to help us with this!"
Zenki doesn't listen and runs up to Red, who is still smiling and glaring at him.
Red: "Rudra? Huh? What is that supposed to mean?"
"Heh. Whatever. It's not going to be enough to hurt me..."
Goki and the others have already retreated into the shrine while Goki has errected a powerful barrier.
Zenki tightly embraces Red: "I guess, it's time..."
"It's all or nothing!"
New Diamond Horns extend from Zenki and a furious thunderstorm starts brewing up.
The thunder growls fiercely and a powerful bolt hits Zenki, unleashing all of his strength in a huge explosion!
But before anyone can get hurt or anything can blow up, the explosion and bolts are sucked up by Red.
Red: "Huh? You were trying to use an electric attack against me? Who is the fool now...?"
Zenki is completely unharmed and horrified. He takes a few steps back: "What did you do with my Rudra attack?!"
Red: "I'm a natural lightning rod. As electricity is my main element and my main weapon is made of it, wouldn't you think that I'd be immune to it, too?"
Goki and Chiaki run back out of the Enno Shrine.
Chiaki: "Zenki, what happened?! We saw your Rudra, but it vanished into thin air!"
Goki: "Is everything alright, Zenki?"
Zenki grumbles. Then he has an idea: "Hey! Chiaki, let's use the Great Breath of the Flame King together!"
Zenki extends both of his Diamond Horns from his fists and leaps up in the air.
Chiaki throws a few spell tags at him: "Khan!"
Her fire spell connects with Zenki's horns and Zenki rams them into the ground, unleashing a fire wall that tears open the ground and charges forth.
Zenki: "CHO KAIN OJIN!!!"
The fire wall and the fissure hit Red, but she flicks her finger and sends the attack right back at Zenki and Chiaki!
Goki leaps in and protects them with his force field.
Red: "This is boring."
Zenki, Goki and Chiaki glare at Red and clench their fists.
Red: "What did you call this? Rudra? Rudora? Fine. Let's have a taste of my version then."
Red lifts her finger and another thunderstorm brews up.
Then she flicks her finger downwards: "Thunder Barrage!!!"
Goki quickly reacts and casts a force field.
Hundreds of lightning bolts hit his force field and the surrounding area, doing way greater damage than Rudra!
Goki's shield breaks and he is knocked out by a bolt while Zenki quickly reacts and tackles Chiaki, landing on top of her and protecting her from the bolts.
After ten thousands of lightning bolts have hit the ground, Red's attack stops.
A badly wounded Akira lays on the ground and Zenki is pretty battered, too.
Zenki struggles to get up. Chiaki is mostly unharmed and quickly runs over to Akira.
"No! Akira! Is everything alright?!"
Akira doesn't answer her. He's knocked out cold, but he protected the Enno Shrine from greater harm.
All that's left of Shikigami-Cho is a smoking crater and many people have died.
Zenki stumbles towards Red, spitting out some blood: "Heh. Are you happy now, you damn woman?"
Red glares at him and grabs him by the throat, but before she can answer him, he passes out.
Red is still very furious, but she waves her hand, undoing all damage, reviving and healing everything and teleporting herself away.
Also everyone would forget their fight, as Red used her powers to change their minds to remember her as a friend and not a foe.
Somewhere on a mountain top, Red is curled up into a ball.
She sobs and talks to herself: "Why did he treat me like that? I just wanted to be with him... However, I will correct my mistakes and approach them differently next time..."